Friday, September 5, 2008
Assignment 1
This is my first blog and im exited!! I have some experience with myspace and such things like that but i have never done a blog so im looking forward on working on it. Its seems crazy how i have never even tried to make a blog but theres always a first time to everything. i know that with a blog i can interact with students and get feedback on my work so that i think is good idea because it will make a better writer as in student. Blogging will become usefull to me because other students from my class can check my work and write comments on my mistakes which will make my writting better. i can go to other students blogs and ask them for help as well as my teacher. Im expecting to learn alot with you Mr. Cantor and preparing me for college so i can go to this world prepared knowing what im supposed to expect in life.I hope to be a good student in your class but i hope this course is not that hard. I hope to get alot out of this class and maybe get me interested enough to major in psychology.well back to the blogging i hope this will help me out alot and be usefull for the future. So far i like blogging it seems fun and a proffesional way of keeping in touch with friends and work. well Mr.Cantor this is all for today is not the best blog but i guess i tried.
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Hi Mariana,
Nice work!
Good job getting your post in a few days early! If you keep doing your work on time you will continue to do great in this class.
Your post is thoughtful and interesting and you addressed all the points of the assignment, which is very important.
I'm glad that you are enjoying the blogging part of our class, and that you think it will encourage you to improve your writing. Did you take a look at any of the other students' blogs yet?
Constructive criticism: At the end of your post you wrote, "well Mr. Cantor this is all for today is not the best blog, but i guess i tried." Mariana, you should be proud of your work and your effort. You don't need to apologize for your work. If YOU don't think it's the best then you can try to improve it, but you are happy with your work be proud of it.
Putting a blank line between paragraphs will make your post more professional and easier to read. Also, proof read your post again and you will find some missing words and small grammar errors. You also need to remember to capitalize the word "I" and the first word of every sentence.
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